This one I think is my best so far. The joke seemed pretty funny to me even after all hassle of wording it correctly. I am still not sure which sounds better or which is correct between "leaving me crouching naked" and "leaving me crouched naked". I guess it is just one of the interesting added elements of the English language.
I wanted people to think that the monkey was on the receiving end and be disgusted by it for the first 2 frames, before the situation is reversed in the final frame. I am not sure if people will actually think that way. Sex with a baby monkey is sort of a taboo subject.
I had a couple of other ideas for this sequence, one of them I am hoping I can use tomorrow if the images stay the same.Everyday as a disciple of the holy Monbasha I have joined the others in following his every move and gesture.From copying someone so divine we hope to become one with the world.But ever since he was re-incarnated as a monkey all he has done is sleep naked.
The other one was:
It's ok I guess.
I showed this to Jeff today, creator of the amazing wigu. I wanted his advice as someone who creates something outstanding everyday to see if it was all worth it. He of course is scared of weird fans and was overly polite but he did say "Keep on keeping on".
So I guess I shall.